A few people have, rightfully so, called out the story as being a regular young adult story with sex scenes thrown into it. While there are other scho...ls of thought, this is a very valid criticism. So how should the very best erotic stories go about balancing their sexual content with their ability to be a story? On a scale of 0 to 100 in writing talent, it takes about a 2 to just write sex. All you need to know about how to write sex is to know the action, then swap synonyms (so like instead. "I'd like to mow her lawn for her," one of his friends said.Chase laughed. "Hell yeah. I swear sometimes that she's coming on to me. Tits hanging out. Bending over all the time." So whip it out." Yeah, right. Just what I need is her freaking out and telling Mom. If she's pissed at me, I'm shit out of luck when I call home from college begging for money. Can't risk making a move, even if she is grade-A Milf. I'd hit that like a prizefighter if I knew for sure she wanted it. Bet she's wild as. "With that, Natalie paled and began to plead desperately. "Oh, Daddy! Please don't punish me in front of him. Please, you can't do that to me. I'll die of shame."Bill couldn't believe his ears, but was thrilled at the prospect of watching this proud, arrogant bitch get her comeuppance. She was always putting him down and saying things to embarrass him in front of friends just because he was younger than she was."Natalie, that's the whole point," Mr. Williams continued sternly. "Spankings alone. He lost it when my titties swung free and almost collapsed as I spun round to show him my shaven slit. We were kissing within seconds, me naked, him clothed. He seemed worried that I was a virgin, when I reassured him I wasn't (telling him about how I lost it, but not with whom) he quickly got as naked as me.I thought Andrew was big and Xander bigger, but Giles was bigger still. His hard prick was ten inches and thick, as he took me on the couch I could feel my cunt straining to accommodate.