"Well the first is your name,but you said you don't want to get known for this. You need a pen name.You need a woman's pen name. Second, there are a n...mber of passageswhere you describe getting dressed, or putting on make-up and they arenot convincing. You don't seem to have much experience here. There arelittle bits and pieces throughout the book which are just wrong." Experience, none actually" I laughed "I've taken off some women'sclothes but that's about it." Well you'll have to work with. As calmly as I could I said “Come outside when you’re dressed and join me and the girls in the sun.” I walked back out to the terrace with my cock tenting my Speedos. Both girls had untied their tops and were lying face up on their towels displaying their firm breasts. Fern saw my condition and asked “is that for us?” and smiled. I grinned but kept quiet. I tossed the sunscreen to her and put the soda on the ground between the two. She squirted some cream onto. She’s sitting on my legs with her boobs exposed.Amy: Oh! Now it’s better.What the hell is she doing?Me: Look, honey.Amy: Shhh! You need to loosen your loins, don’t you?What? She was talking about my underwear. I didn’t realize but I had a huge hard-on in my underwear.Amy: It seems like it’s pushing to get out of there.She bent forward and toucher my crotch with her hands.Amy: It must hurt a lot, doesn’t it?Oh, God! She suddenly removed my underwear and exposed my rock hard dick.Amy: My God!. We made small talk until we reached the room I would have the massage in where she asked me to take my boxers off. I told her I would rather I kept them on, but she insisted I take them off so I would be free of clothing and could really enjoy the massage, so I took them off. I lay face down on the massage table. She turned the lights off, put on some soft music and covered me in towels. The scent of the oil she used was something between that of an orange and a tangerine and her warm hands.