Two, it seemed to be pretty damn good, double whoa. And three, what the hell was I going to do with it? I tried editing it, I even enlisted the help ...f a Lit-Editor, who was invaluable for early editing, and confirming it was in fact, pretty good, or readable at least. I spent several months then, editing, unashamedly forcing it on writer friends to read, regular friends to read, and total strangers on writer boards. Everyone had different opinions of course, as people do, but all of them. ”Masters frowned, “When we are back at base, those charges, will result in a court martial for which I am required to investigate and gather evidence. No matter what I determine, my other immediate responsibility is to decide if there is reason that you should be relieved or are able to carry out your duties until then.”Lying in her bed, a concubine snuggled on either side, Boats could hear Crystal Gayle singing River Road in her head.Mama said, listen childYou’re too old to run wildYou’re too. Neil’s hands were shaking as he pushed his fingers inside the waistband of them. Claire lifted her hips and Neil tugged at them. Moments later they were being pulled from around her ankles. Karl ran his fingers over the well trimmed dark triangle of dark pubic hair. “You wife has a beautifully cunt, Neil,” he told him. “I am going to enjoy tasting her in a few minutes time when you leave.” Neil swallowed hard as he stood there passively watching Karl’s fingers stroke her mound. “Does she. "Ok, you can, but one condition." What is that?" I asked."I get to do it to you sometime," he smiled.I laughed and hugged him."Of course you can!" Ok, sweetie... just be careful." I will."I smiled at him sweetly.I called Alex a few days later when Mike was at work. I could tell he was thrilled by the tone of his voice, but he was just a little hesitant."You sure it's ok with your boyfriend?" he asked."Yes, we talked it over. He said it was ok as long as he can do it to me sometime."We both.