The room was thick with the smell of our bodies and after what seemed like an hour Tom said he was very close and was going to come. I was so turned o... at this point, almost without thinking, a got up and crawled on my hands and knees to where Tom was leaning back against an arm chair and took his stiff penis in my mouth. Tom said "Oh god, Simon" and cried out as I felt his cock spasm in my mouth and after a second I felt warm liquid in my mouth. I waited until he had finished ejaculating and. I told him if he thought Pete was reliable then after this business was complete he could point him in my direction and I would interview him. John said he would bear that in mind while he was dealing with the young man.John met with Pete and again provided lunch. He looked at Pete thoughtfully and then said, "If I offered you temporary employment, could I trust you to treat anything you learn about my client and the people he is interested in as confidential." Sure," said Pete. "One thing. Nothing had happened at all. Except that he gave her his warmth, and made her feel safe.“Are you sure?” he asked, sounding puzzled.“I’m sure,” she said.“Okay,” he replied, accepting the situation.She wondered what he was thinking as she slid back out of bed. She felt like that bolt of lightning might arrive any second as she watched his eyes rake over her body. With complete astonishment, she saw what her mother was talking about in his eyes, that wild, animal, hungry ... lustful look. But he. The Slow Reality aspect was going to be emphasizedmore, but I found that the story became awkward if I stuck to that plotdevice. So, though the 3 stages of changes were still there, I didn'tplay it up after the first few.I don't know that I'll ever write another story, but I would love to haveyour feedback about the overall story, plot, writing style, etc. if youwill offer it. I feel like my writing got better as I went, but knowthat it needs work. I am tempted to go back and clean up the.