" Her hand raised and lowered.I put my hand on her exposed knee and slid my hand up the outside of her thigh. "Your skin is very smooth." I cupped one...Bollard buttock.She leaned closer. I put my face in position and we kissed. A long firm kiss. Her hand moved more quickly. I pulled her closer until she had to straddle my thighs. I planted my hands on her ass and rubbed. "Oh Mr. Marcus." Call me Harvey."I heard Alyssa unzip her mother's dress. When the material hung loose, I pulled the dress. ” She called over her shoulder.Mallory nodded. “Okay, then. See you.”Daphne sat on her bed and sipped her cola. She watched with mournful eyes as Carmen stared at her blank laptop screen. “Carmen are you sure you’re okay?” She eked the words from her throat, afraid to pierce the silence.“Yeah.” Carmen spat. She did little to hide her dismissive tone. Her head never moved, and the uncomfortable quiet resumed.Daphne woke her phone and checked the time; Not that it mattered, but it served as a. I don't have a problem with minor typos and more obscure grammatical errors, but you should always use capital letters at the beginning of a sentence, for proper nouns, and the word "I". Try not to use tense shifting, it's one of my pet peeves. Tense shifting is when you start a chapter in one tense and suddenly shift to another at a random point for no reason. As a general rule, this story is in present tense, unless you are using a flashback.Keep in mind that this story should be in second. She was so wet as my fingers slid up and down the length of her pussy, stopping to torment her slippery clit. Our fingers traveled everywhere, as Maple bucked under us, demanding release. All the pain and pleasure brought her to the edge but that is where her body stayed, begging to cum.I felt movement and noticed Red reach to the head of the bed and lower something to Maple's pussy. I realized it was a vibrator when I heard the hum as Red turned it on. The hum increased in sound as Red turned.