I write what I envision to be a scene or what is needed to move the story forward, length does not enter into the equation. However, any constructive ...riticism is always welcome. If you think there are parts where I could expand or flesh things out please send me an email. Thank you and enjoy! The Ahlissan Chronicles ~ Book I ~ The Midnight Maiden Chapter 10: A Favor Returned The stables were quiet when Brion arrived, everyone was still at the field of honor talking about the contest with. " As she put the first spoon full in my mouth I though I was going to lose my cookies I think I did not because there were no cookies to lose. Just as I made a face and started to spit it out a bright light went off Mrs. Larson grandma was taking my picture.I don't know how I got it all down maybe because Tina did not give me a change not to, she just keep putting it in. I think she was racing. I had food all over my face which gave grandma more reasons for picture. Tina wiped my face and. There were several other people enjoying the sun and scenery at Lake Kegonsa: a family having a picnic, three guys with kayaks, a couple taking a walk along the water, and an older lady reading a novel. On the water were an assortment of motorboats, jet-skis, canoes, paddle boats, and so on. No one paid us much attention as Jenny guided her SUV into a relatively secluded space at the back of the parking lot, beneath a large pine tree. As soon as she shift the vehicle into park, her seat belt. But we have to face this sooner or later. Men are attracted to us. When I am dancing waltzes I feel their hardness as they brush close to me. I am sure you do too!" Yes, I do." I know you're so like me and I'd wager that you like the feel of it." At times," Michelle admitted."Look!" Melissa said sternly, sitting at her side on the silken bench seat. "If we don't marry these guys within the next year, we're going to be the talk of the town." As if you really care," Melissa sneered."Yes, I do.