The chapter was up to Saturday morning, about 5,000 words so far. She read through it and as she got closer to the end, her smile grew. I hoped that w...s good news, an idea. I was sure out of them.“I know exactly what you need to do… and that last sex scene, too,” she said.“Ooookay… I’m listening,”“Okay, first the sex scene,” she looked up at me, “you know which of your chapters really turned me on when I read it? Addie in that glass cage, all those people watching her.”Whoa, that surprised me.. I held up my hand and kissed hers. "You know I'm not going to try and run away?"She smiled at me. "I know. I'm waiting for Tom to show up. When he finds the store locked up, he'll search the entire mall for me." How do you know that?"Renée joined in. "Because he's done it before." Renée and I had lunch a couple weeks ago and Tom hadn't shown up. So I locked the store since I was the only one there and came here to eat." It was pretty funny. He sputtered and groaned about leaving the shop closed. "The... new girl? The brunette over there that usually wears glassesshe's not wearing tonight?" I wanted to point, but I knew it was rudeand would likely embarrass the poor girl."Catches on quick, doesn't he?" Danika grinned sarcastically. "She'sbeen eyeing you since she overheard you telling Marcus about alightsaber thing your parents had gotten you for Christmas."I nodded, knowing she was referring to my Force FX Lightsaber gushing.I had been a very spoiled geek that Christmas. Before the. First off I will be referring to John as my dad as I so hate calling him my step dad as he more or less raised me. My mom and real dad divorced when I was just a baby. John came into my mom's and my life a little over 25 years ago. My mom had swore that she would never marry another guy as she didn't really trust no guy after her first marriage as he was mean and very abusive from what she had told me. Well John just kind of swept her off her feet when he came along as to me, hell I liked him.