There are calls for significant character development, a broadening of the story and more. They want things spelled out more. That is not a flash stor.... A flash story is limited and highly focused. There is little story space for character development. There is little fleshing out the background story, outside what is strategically needed. I have found that this really pisses some people off. (That is the professional technical term by the way.) Sorry about that. It is part of the limitations. As I undid my belt she was letting her jeans drop to the floor to pool around her incredibly thin ankles. Her plain white panties were next to go and as I was peeling off my shorts I got my first look at her pussy. It couldn't have been more different than Flo's. She had a thin patch of long stringy blonde hair above the almost bald lips of her sex. I could plainly see the hood of her very large clit poking out. She stepped out of the clothes gathered at her feet just as I was pulling off my. There back hidding the obvious until i pass them to enter the big jacuzzithe 2 small head bobbling up and down on hard black cocksfeeling so nervous looking at the scenei forgot about Alice to my sidehelping me to turn around her fat cock out''open up sexy''getting on my knees face above the water like the other white boy behind me slurping on 3 cocks''does your mom knows you suck on cock ''''mmmm yes like that take your time , enjoy it , first time sucking is always special for white cute. “Down boy.” Holly quipped, raising her eyebrows. “Oh honey, don’t be silly, hell I’m just like any other male, you know? I told you before doll you and me Holly babe. Cant shoot a guy for looking now can you? C’mon.” He chirped patting her ass while thinking of Laura’s. “Anyway doll your little ass is way better.” He retorted. “I can testify to that.” He kissed her longingly, his hands slid under her short red dress clamping onto her tiny ass cheeks roaming round and finding the gusset of her.