‘I know that smell' Stacey thought to herself as she took another big sniff. It was a very obvious smell and one that could only be made by two peop...e having SEX. Stacey sat on the bed and thought.Downstairs April and Lee were in the kitchen talking. "God that was close." Lee said as he wiped his forehead on the back of his hand."Don't worry Lee; Stacey didn't catch us, now did she?" April said more confidently, trying to reassure her worried brother."But she almost did. If we had been a bit. I was the hunter and he played the role of the reluctant younger boy who wants to resist the sexual advances of his older best friend but eventually gives in at the end. He "played" that role but from the very start we both knew he was going through the motions and that we both wanted the same thing and with each other. I played along too and our seduction game lasted almost six months with much of it hot and sensual and sexually thrilling for both of us. The hot seduction help make the actual. Yes, I do realize the irony. But anyhow, I'mlooking through FM and segments of the BEA, when I started to realize howshit-poor some of the writing is. (Please don't kill me.) Little sidenote about FM. Somehow, the lower rated a story is the better thewriting. I call it the IPP Inversely proportional porno. Keep in mind,every rule has an exception.As with any medium of fiction there are two main issues that define tgstories. These are content and language. Language is much easier todefine so. All he could think about was Tasha.Through his weariness, he thought he could see Tasha, laying there, filled up with his juices, smiling, satisfied, and full of love for him. He loved that in his mind, Tasha wanted to share all of her love with him, and appreciate him.John crept out of the room as he slowly felt a throbbing in his loins. He locked the bathroom door as he began stroking and pulling at his member as it grew harder and longer in his hand. He was biting his lip as he rubbed and.