She collapsed on to my chest, her head coming to rest in the nape of my neck, as she trembled and shook, my cock buried deep inside of her. She lay th...re for the longest time, without moving. As nature took it course and things began to subside, she hummed her approval and said she was still feeling the waves of her orgasm.I have no idea how long we lay there, simply enjoying the peaceful solitude of listening to each other breathing.“You’re good,” she whispered. I had to agree and. Though he did suggest I convert to Times New Roman font. I thanked him for his suggestions and made the font change. I didn't even mind the implied criticism.I posted the story, it was a little out of place because the site specializes in erotica, but they allowed about anything legal to be posted.It was up for less than eight hours and I started getting emails. Most were complimentary but several with some sincere criticism. I went back and did a thorough spell and punctuation check, and fixed. " Chet continued to kiss my body passionately, yet taking his time with every inch of it. I then reached down to find him standing at attention telling me hello, I put my hand on his 8 1/2 inch cock and started to tease stroke it. I then stopped him and put my mouth around on it while still stroking it. I so wanted to taste every drop of him in my mouth. I sucked and stroked him at the same time while I heard him moan. I loved hearing him moan it made me know I was doing something he enjoyed. I. I was seventeen before that happened. "So what happened next did you give your friend a blowjob or screw him?" Wilson asked."His name was Shawn and he had a car. I was fifteen and he was the coolest guy I ever met. He was a high school football player. We had been groping for a few months, when he took me to the park on a warm spring night. I was so excited by the anticipation that I really didn't pay much attention to my surroundings.He played with my breasts, then put his hand in my panties..