Also, I guesswhat turns the story around is the motivation of the protagonist. Isuppose adding this ending is selling out, but maybe you guys would f...ndthe ending more satisfying. Enough people commented their dislike toencourage me, because the story did keep them involved to see it throughthe end and want to leave a comment of their own. Comments welcomedespecially from those who have already commented."I am going to count backwards from 5 and when I reach one you will becomefully. Through the foster system I'd grown a strong immunity to other peoplebut Connor had a talent of breaking down my walls. I couldn't helpfeeling vulnerable and hurt after Connor had abandoned me after ourmoment of pure, unadulterated passion. I knew what I needed. I had tofind a way to get Connor alone so that we could talk about what hadhappened.CONNORS POVJust after kiss"I... I should probably go" I say, lying through my teeth. "Daria reallywanted to see me." It killed me lying to Jude like. .. no!... oh Jesus, yes, yes, yes yes yes yes!"He couldn't help himself. The words tore from his throat, in a strangled kind of whisper that he scarcely recognized, and then his mouth was grinding against her, his tongue was flailing deep, deep into her mouth. Sue's hand began to move faster on his turgid prick, and she sucked and nibbled at his tongue, swirling her own tongue around and around his, darting it into his mouth and then drawing it back to accept the onslaught of his probing. It was either the third or fourth time that my horny, slut wife changed her outfit. She wore a black mini-skirt with black, thigh-high hose, and a sheer blouse with a red shelf bra. She really looked the part of a street whore.When I picked her up that time she had several loads of cum on her blouse, and some on her face, plus a very big cream-pie. She really looked like a slut.“Well, it looks like you had a good time at the porn theater, this time, my slut wife,” I began talking as I started.