All necessary threads are present,Final scenes still need to be written.This is my first attempt at anyerotic literature. Constructivecriticism greatl... appreciated!Update 9-12Sorry story writing has halted. Havesome higher priority things I'm working onright now.I would still love to see this completedto my original vision. If my pace is tooglacial for you and you've got some ideaslet me know and maybe I'll feelcomfortable letting you add on.There are 18 planned endings.8 endings would result. My dream was to marry a beautiful, kind woman, have children, and grow old with her ... Not that I could do that, thanks to the drugs. Now, i have a life span of three hundred years.”“Now that you really won’t make it.”Lucas smiled bitterly as he listened to Caritas’s words. Rose, however, answered.“Yes, I know, but it’s your mother ... She told me years ago that you wouldn’t be a one-woman man.”“Just because of that, were you prepared for me to have other women?”“No, there’s another reason: I. I want to make love to some one” there was no reply for around 10 min. Then after some time what are you gone mad I said no I’m serious after all that movies I watched about love making I’m losing it now and she said nothing for a couple of days. Then she asked me how I was after some days, I said what difference until I get what I need I will not be fine and then I asked he and can you help me some how and she asked how I didn’t want to jump the gun. I said if you know any of your friends with. .i want to lick you....''''oh but you look great with a cock head in your mouth''''Alyssa right Alex you are cute sucking this cock''''i think he will love the panty , here lets see''i shook ass up , the 2 girls popping me open as i moan and beg ''its too big''''oh no its not your doing a good job relax Alex let that cute pink ass open ''''yes Alex let it in i want you to lick me look''Alyssa was in skirt and had no panty, all shaved , i was move forward by her pulling me between her legs''kiss.