Along a similar line, the pacing was way off in the beginning of the story. Susannah’s chapters went too slow, and Cindy’s chapters went too fast....I should have better balanced out the Rebellion POVs. Unfortunately, I was posting a chapter every time I finished a chapter, which made it quite difficult to go back and fix things like that. Which is why, in the future, I am going to write several chapters, and then release one at a time so I can get feedback while still giving myself some leeway. The Face of the Asshole. I recognized him as a guy from one of Cindy's social functions that we went to! He was always asking her to dance, and she was always accepting those dances. NOW I knew why! My anger grew again, and I was more than ready to put my plan into action!The hardest part was going to be acting normal when I got home. I wasn't about to tip my hand to The Bitch before I could play it. I took a deep breath, then went inside. I pasted on my best Loving Husband smile and went. She must have found a tough spot as she started to rub quite hard which moved her arse hard against me and I could feel my cock trying to get between her cheeks, good job she had panties on or who knows what could have happened. She turned her head back, “Sorry” she said softly as she pressed her arse hard against me, “It’s ok” I said, “better to get the marks out and you are doing a great job” I said, “Oh thank you so much” she replied and just by chance I felt her legs open a little and with. "She finished putting away the dishes, looked into the family room to see Rick sitting on the floor playing with the kids and the sight gladdened her heart. It was so good to have him home with her. She went down to the basement and tossed a load of laundry in the washer and then went upstairs to the bedroom and started digging through her chest of drawers looking for what she wanted to wear. She found what she was looking for and then she showered, dried off and then worked on her hair and.