..We a bbq the girls danced and drank wild whilst I burned the meat to Desired tastethe I started knocking so beers back after a while we had finished...barbecuing and retreated back to cabin Jackie said "lets play a game" "truth or dare " i said gill was up for it to jackie got à bottle and spun it "gill I dare you to handstand and down a shot" she said and up your gill, she then dared Jackie to jump in the lake naked Jackie wasn't going at she had a shot then she bolted to the lake and back in. .. I pointed at a black corset that was on display Me: that's what I want you to wearSue: Are you sure? Once we add the matching panties it could get expensiveMe: I'm sure!She picked out her size and we walked to the register. We paid and walked out to the car. While walking in the parking lot, Sue directed my attention to two random guys who were walking behind usSue: If u were to choose, which one of those two would you prefer to see fuck me?I was so horny I just wanted to get her home!. I posted the story, it was a little out of place because the site specializes in erotica, but they allowed about anything legal to be posted.It was up for less than eight hours and I started getting emails. Most were complimentary but several with some sincere criticism. I went back and did a thorough spell and punctuation check, and fixed some run on sentences, also paragraphs were too long. One person pointed out that I was being unrealistic on how long I was having my character hit a golf. " OK.", said Frank and took the box home. He didn't notice the shop fade away as he walked toward the mall door. When he got back he started getting ready for the party, which didn't take long because all he wore was a flannel shirt and a pair of jeans, with his everyday work boots (Frank wasn't much into fashion, either, which didn't help his love life.). He read the spell, which was very simple and easy to follow: it just involved a couple of lines he had to repeat three times, some gibberish.