Constructive comments, emails, and suggestions are welcome and appreciated. If you like or even dislike this story please send an email detailing your...opinion and/or suggestions. Reading these critiques will help me become a better writer. Thanks for taking the time to read my work and please enjoy. *************** I don’t know if at 45 I can really be considered a dirty old man, I’m sure some of you will think that I am. You see I’m dating and infatuated with a woman, well maybe a girl of 22. .." He turned my head, just behind me was a toilet type bowl, with what appeared to be a fountain in it. "That's a bidet, you're going to need more than paper on your bum, and I'll also have some ointment as your ass will be sore."I could agree with him on that last point, I couldn't stand anything passing through my bottom at the moment. Paul put his arm under my leg and another behind my back and lifted me gently onto the bidet.The shock of the warm water washing my bottom was... nice, and. When Kim saw them sitting in the tub, she too climbed out and went to join them, calling to her brother to come with her.The two teens slipped into the churning hot water and settled back. Kim began to slide around closer to her dad, but he put his hand on her shoulder and stopped her from getting too close. Kim looked into her father's eyes, searching for an indication of why he kept her at arm's length."Did I do something wrong dad?" She asked."No Kim, and you're not going to either." Don. 1. make a nice name. short crisp yet hard on-able. "daddy" is helpful. "daughter" "mother" and all female relatives make for good titles. add "slut" "slave" or "whore" for good measure. people writing in gay genre ignore point 1.2. again I say, make it short. like a miniskirt, but not like a dick. if you can't, make an apealing title and add the rest in subtitle.3. add tags, lots of them don't overtly abuse them, but even if a hint is there, go for it. as one author put it, tags are free.