First time writer. and no I did NOT use an editor. I saw soe many listed. I asked a couple writers for opinions. abotu editors. I couldn’t decide on...one so I just sucked it up and posted the story.I fully expect to be roasted for a whole bunch of items like grammar, story structure. Heck it’s the risk you take for putting yourself out there. Many of the keyboard warriors likely can’t write either. But they like to critique.This story does have some basis in fact. I met a woman through a work. They weren't idle until then though. Dewayne and Kyle had taken to teaching them how to run the band's sound board which was set up across the room. They had, using a play on words, dubbed them the 'Sound Chicks'.Tony and Tina had asked the guys to warm up with a few songs that they had already perfected to give Rebecca a little taste of their sound before they got down to the grind of working out new songs.Rebecca had opted to stay in her chair for a little mobility around the basement. When. Sat on the edge of an old settee Jenny tried to push Jo away saying she’d better get back to help Angela, but Jo was so well committed that no way was he going to stop his action until he’d reached his Waterloo, so he carried on pumping regardless.It was Jenny who had set him up with all her French kissing and her bunching his bulge from the start. He knew he was onto a good thing and often he called by pretending he had a delivery, when the only real delivery was the parcel inside his jeans,. Next morning i see he was already gone for work he must have gotten in late i get up to check on the baby then start my routine then the door bell rings im in just my panties and didnt want to change quickly i went downstairs and answered the door there was my husbands friend i was about to tell him to go away when he bursts through the door and grabs me i tried fighting but hes a b**st of a man a 6'6 210 pounds and very much in shape and well muscled he throws me against the door covers my.