Zina Mace Finds Love is the working title and that title would never had made it to the printing press. On the introduction page you wrote, ‘A Love ...tory.’ Well she did meet Leo McIntosh and oh dear, what a caricature he was and there was no suggestion he was capable of getting it up tizzy Zina. Neither of them appeared to have heard of penetration. I did well at high school on literary appreciation. I’d give your manuscript three out of five but only because much of the dialogue and scene. I am sure she would have done anything to get him horny. I had put a profile in an underground website and they found me and got in touch. It was Vivian who contacted me. She told me her husband, Peter, wanted her to make out with another woman. She seemed very keen but with one proviso, I was not to have intercourse with him. I guessed that meant oral was still allowed.It was a Sunday afternoon and I told dad I had an appointment. He had stopped asking as he knew what I was doing. He would. Suddenly, Tom and I were alone keeping an eye on all of our stuff.Tom seemed to be scanning the crowd, purposefully keeping his eyes from looking at me."Hey John," he said casually, "can I ask you a question about photography?"I stared at him for a long moment, but he wouldn't look my way. He didn't look upset."Sure. What's up?" I replied.His eyes continued to look everywhere except at me."Kathy was showing me some pictures you took, and I found them rather striking."His eyes still scanned the. Mrs. Whitaker turned to Revanche "why the stones in that dagger would pay for several years worth of supplies but she didn't give me the chance to say anything." Revanche sighed "I'll talk to her Mrs. W don't worry about it, just put the dagger away somewhere safe, she may want to reclaim it one day." Revanche returned to the Manor House frowning and upset with himself at how attracted he had been to the woman Raimi.Revanche had Laurel sign the final purchase papers on the new property, Laurel.