What's the harm in looking around? You've never been in abarbershop before, and the chairs look very comfortable, so you walktowards one and sit down....You were right, it is comfortable, and as youare settling in, a man comes in from the back room and approaches you inthe chair. You try to apologise and leave, but you can't form the words,so all you do is smile as he covers you in a big black nylon cape. Hedoesn't say anything as he starts to comb your hair with long strokes. Hegathers up your. I went to hold her and kiss her but she pushed me away "in the lounge Sam". I led the way in to the lounge where the blinds were drawn and took a seat on her leather sofa not knowing what to expect next. She sat opposite me and fixed me with a stare."No one is to know what happened last night Sam" she said. My heart sank and all my earlier anxieties came rushing to the surface. "And no one is to know of ANYTHING we do together from now ok?". Relief like I'd never felt in my life before filled . Her eyes were shut. The blanket on top moved up and down with her breathing. Mum looked at me and spoke."It was nice of you to sleep on the mattress last night so Lily had a bed to sleep on." My mum thought I had slept on the mattress."The mattress wasn't very comfortable," I said, stretching my back."We've got to wake her up now." Mum laid a hand on Lily and softly shook her body. "Wake up," she said lightly. "Today's your first day at your new school."Lily yawned and rubbed her eyes."Did you. I said I would like to re-write it a little differently; (for my own amusement) and send it to him for his own posting. I only sent it once; with no reply. I do not claim the name of "Zoë," or the theme of the story as my creation. I have edited the sex scene but kept most of his dialogue. He has an exciting series of stories. Right now, I am just writing. I offer this as an alternative version to his:Airport Examinationby Finc (edited 3 31 2015)The orderly queue had slowly but surely descended.