You can see a tiny glint of clear liquid setting right on top of my slit. I can feel it, cool against my hot cock, and look down to notice it. Then ... look up just as the tip of your tounge disappears back into your mouth, it is as if you were ready to lick that pearl off the tip of my cock. Maybe it was my imagination?I look back and notice that you have bent a little further forward and I can see the gap between your breasts and the bra band that is holding them in place. I want to put my. As we looked over the menus I felt her foot bump my leg. I assumed it was just an accident from shifting in the booth till I felt her bare foot start to rub against my ankle and up under my trouser leg. I leaned over close to her ear and whispered “I’ll give you all night to stop that” to which she replied “You know you don’t want me to stop and you’ll give me more than all night”. I knew she was right and I also knew that my cock was filling with blood at the thrill of this woman touching. “Okay. Let’s start with the story arc. I think you could begin with something more dramatic that draws the reader into the story more rapidly. It’s the third page before we have a clue that they are boarding a spaceship. Lead with it. Even a simple a sentence of thought from the main character that said, ‘I took one last look at the earth before I boarded for my journey to the stars.’ Something that immediately sets the scene. Then you can deal with the weight of his baggage, the nods to people. 5", so he swallowed my cock no problem. I was in heaven, his warm mouth wrapped around my hard cock, I wanted to explode there and then. I sat back and closed my eyes while he went to work on my cock, licking, sucking, stroking, you name it he did it.After what felt like a lifetime I felt my cock tensing and I was ready to shoot my load. He pulled back, looked up at me and said "I really must repay the favour" and sank my cock back into his mouth. It didn’t take long before I was pumping hot.