Their editors were starting to piss me off. Changing page after page was getting to be a lot of work and a royal pain in the ass. So for the third tim... I went through my story, line by line, until I thought it was perfect and submitted it. What do they say, third times a charm? Well it was for me. A week later it appeared on the website under Loving Wife’s. ‘Am I good or what?’ I said to myself as I basked in the glow of finally getting my first one posted. I didn’t think ratings could get. She loved the weekends, they were the only time she got to escape the hell that was her house. She enjoyed spending the weekend at her best and only friends house, a cute nerdy looking girl named Joleen. She craved everything that Joleen had: a nice, normal house with a nice, normal, loving set of parents and loving siblings. She was also envious of how happy and outgoing and confident Joleen was, which she could never muster from herself. Her home life left her feeling dirty and ashamed, and. We were working ourselves up pretty well when Nanette slid the shower door open and joined us.“Oh, that looks like fun,” she laughed. “I got here just in time.”“You might be too late,” Donna panted.“Then I’d better hurry.” Nanette got down on the shower floor and pressed her face against Donna’s pussy as I continued to saw in and out. Nanette has a facile tongue and managed to even get a few licks in on my cock while she was beating Donna’s clit. Donna and I both exploded and I fell back a. With the door open, I couldn’t actually hear anything. ‘Turn the damn music down!’ I said. I had to shout. Laura stomped over to the stereo and turned it down. I shook my head. ‘Laura, what the hell is wrong with you? I was trying to sleep!’ Laura put her hands on her hips, her shoulders thrust forward with attitude. ‘So? I didn’t know you were trying to sleep! You didn’t tell me! No matter what I do you’re always complaining!’ I looked at Laura. She was acting very strange. ‘Fine,’ I said..