To say I was proud of myself was an understatement. I looked up to see my boyfriend adjusting the rear view mirror so he could watch and although I wa... happy he could see how good I was doing, I was slightly worried he’d get us all killed. But ultimately. I was too consumed with my BIG CHOCOLATE TREAT to really give a fuck.I loved the noises the stud made as I sucked him and how he talked to me. “That’s it, throat me bitch.” Then how he talked to my boyfriend, “You better marry this girl, she. Up and down she sucked my cock, drooling all over the head of my penis. She tried to literally suck my dick right off my body. It was incredible. She then started moving upward, kissing my stomach and chest. Then she worked her way around my neck and ears. I moved my fingers into her pussy, which was soaked. "Oh fuck yeah, that feels good." She straddles me while my hand was in-between, and I started to lift her with the same hand that dipped two fingers inside her snatch. My fingers picked up. I could see… you know..’ ‘What could you see, David?’ Becky asked. ‘No point in being shy now Dave.’ ‘When you raised you arm to wave, the sleeve of your blouse slid up a little and I could see your underarm hair peeking out, and it looks like you haven’t shaved it in a long time, if at all.’ All that in one breath, as I recall, and sweating like a pig all the while, fully realizing what I might have done to kill my chances with her. ‘Made you want to run out the door, huh?’ Becky said with. But he won in the end.(*Anne-Mal) But isn't it a challenge to write something different?(elrodw) It sure is! :) But then, you can always find enough plot twists, unique characters and such and still stay in a theme you're comfortable in. I think writing something different is mostly a matter of not being afraid to try something different. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't.Any other questions? Or shall I just rant on endlessly, extolling the virtues of my favorite stories!(*Anne-Mal) Well.