But after reading the comments of those who wrote I have decided to softenthe ending and by necessity give the protagonist a gender. Also, I guesswha... turns the story around is the motivation of the protagonist. Isuppose adding this ending is selling out, but maybe you guys would findthe ending more satisfying. Enough people commented their dislike toencourage me, because the story did keep them involved to see it throughthe end and want to leave a comment of their own. Comments. The last being the son of the council leader. "My family and I wish you thank you, not only for twice restoring honor to our family but for returning my brother and me." The very young looking man said then hugged Jake as did the council leader. As soon as they left, Gen appeared with a list, "Uh Master?" She asked. "Yes Gen? Did I forget something?" That was when Jake spotted the list in Gen's hands. "Master we have rescheduled all the visits to one a day now," here Gen smiled a slow. .. Daddy and Harold! Ooooooooooooh!"Please, Daddy, let's turn over," Ellen pleaded.Roger locked his hands tightly to Ellen's smooth-curving hips and rolled to the side, pulling her skewered young body backwards on top of him. His rapidly throbbing cock was still imbedded deep within her rectum as she now lay full length on her back tight against his stomach and chest. Her legs splayed out limply on the outside of his legs, a long low mewl coming from her trembling lips.Harold didn't hesitate:. I just kept quiet looking at him, knowing that my face was probably red as a tomato. "Why don't you strip for me?" He asked."God, no, I can't do that..." I said brushing a lock of hair from my eyes and looking down."You don't have to be shy with me. As a matter of fact, you're gorgeous, you don't have to be ashamed in front of anybody." I looked at him and he continued. "C'mon, I'm not asking you to dance or anything, just get up and slowly take them off, would you? I'll reward you for that...".