When she’s finished, Mara carefully licks a few remaining traces from the tip of his cock and then pulls his robe back down into place. By this tim... Vader has already pulled free of her but as Mara starts to lean back a hard, leather glove grips her shoulder and abruptly spins her around. Standing with his hands on his hips Vader thrusts his massive, semi-erect cock towards her face, obviously intending for her to give him the same treatment. Mara feels a sudden flash of anger, realizing that. ." Joey managed, but that was really as far as he could get.She stepped up to him and spun about, twirling on one foot and letting her skirt blossom around her legs. "So! What do you think?"Joey tried again. "I ... God, wow, I love your..." He swallowed and stuttered, gazing at her body, his eyes taking in all the creamy bare skin of her chest and arms and face and neck. "Yes, I um ... I..." Externally he was incapable of expressing a coherent thought, but internally it was all "God, I love. I wonder if the sexy slut in the picture ever masturbates like me. Emma, is that you in here? Its my dads voice. I instantly panic. I have to hide the magazine, or pull up my panties, or grab my pants, or duck behind the garbage can, or&hellip,too late. My dad is standing close by looking around. He hasnt seen me yet, but he will any second. In the shock of the moment, I didnt end up doing any of the things my brain told me to do all at once. Oh, Emma, it is you, he smiles when he sees me.. I think a lot of the incomplete stories we see are by relatively new authors who just gave up in frustration, or from time issues that they didn't anticipate. Others were perhaps frustrated by scores or feedback (or lack thereof) ... and that's too bad.When people have asked me for advice (as if I know anything) I always say start small. No multi-chapter stories, just 2-5K words, crank it out and post it and do another one. Do a bunch of those. Not good for everyone perhaps, but that is my.