”You wanna taste my piss soaked fingers baby” she said.”Yes please mommy”.she then put her fingers in my mouth while the other hand start wank...ng me off,Oh fuck I was so close to cumming.”you gonna cum for me baby,cover those knickers for me in your jizz I want to wear them out tonight”“Im cumming ooooooooooh fuck”I shot load after load into her knickers.“Your gonna make mommy cum you dirty boy”just then she started squirting all over the floor.“OH baby that was so hot”She grabbed the knickers. We hurried to the pub, found a seat at a table near the bar and got settled in for some celebration. It was plain to see that the brisk air took its toll on Divya, as her nipples were hard and poking out of her tight fitting top. I could not help but stare as Divya is very well built for a mid-30 woman. Her 34 D breasts look even greater in form fitting clothes such as the top she was wearing that evening. Divya caught me in a trance and asked if I wanted to take a picture so it would last. Fucking is my choice and I choose to do it now."He seized her again and kissed her brutally with one hand on her bottom and one hand behind her neck. He kissed her until the heat melted her and she sagged against him. He picked her up in his arms and strode toward the door. I opened it for him and attended him as he almost ran for the guest house. I opened the guest house door and he carried her inside. In the second before he kicked the door shut behind him, he said, "We are not to be. "The last thing we want to do is imply that the audience is stupid. It'll be way more powerful if they suddenly 'get it' on their own." Right!" I said slowly, suddenly getting it on my own."And this part here, where you're filling in the back story in dialog? Don't do that. It's really unrealistic for Fiona to be talking like a narrator, and it'll take the audience out of the story a bit." Which part?" Well, here: 'When I was little, I was locked in a pitch-black closet all day at a friend's.