Why should a story? I have a starting place, and ending place, and a message. Then I write. I play and see where it takes me. Sometimes I'm surpris...d where it ends up.(sue) That was an excellent answer!!!(Mindy) When is a story finished, I see some stories edited to death, while some need more editing. You seem to have struck a fine balance! Could you explain to others what to look for?(Raven) I am a firm believer in not over-editing. I think your first thought is usually your best. I. I'd heard this before, so I knew they were finishing up. I took my hard cock out of my pants and Kara started playing with it. She was as turned on by the fucking noises as I was.Kara had a good rhythm going on my cock as I lifted her shirt and got rid of her bra. I started sucking her nipples and she moaned, pulling harder on my cock.Kyle and Stacy finally got there together, gasping loudly as his bed stopped squeaking. By this time I was pulling down Kara's jeans and undies.I freed my cock. Now, all kinds of animals loved that cabbage. Quinn considered lots of remedies. Walls of fire. Ice swords of eternal vigilance. But being the easy going kind of wizard that he was, and not really wanting to blast innocent animals into their basic component molecules without due cause, he chose instead a nonviolent method.He shrunk them. Moved them to a safe distance. And then canceled the spell. Shrunken animals tended not to repeat their mistakes.Local boys, though, who assume a basically. Time and again, his thoughts came back to her. Hermione had always been the one he wanted. And the thought that he could have lost her tonight was driving him mad. What if he never got the chance to tell her how he was crazy about her? What if he never got to kiss and hold her? What if he never got to fuck her?Harry felt himself stiffen at the thought of grabbing Hermione, pulling her close, and kissing her deep. One hand grabbing her hair, the other tracing her mosquito-bite tits.Harry catches.