’ We both relaxed a bit and I felt like I had the upper hand because she was trying to speak my language. I stood up on the second step and stuck o...t my hand to shake hers. She seemed confused. ‘I am not ready for swimming’ she said politely. I smiled at her and she gave me a puzzled smile back because she had thought that by offering her my hand, I was inviting her into the pool. Obviously a handshake wasn’t the standard greeting in her country, so I explained. I had already resigned myself. Before that i was not much interested in her, but slowly i got attracted to her, after seeing her huge and fat ass, and big boobs. Slowly we started chatting through internal chat window, and on internal extension. We became so close friends that we used to share everything with one another. One day, we had fight and I did not go to office, due to my health issue, and was not speaking to her, due to the fight. When I resumed the office after 2 days, I received a call from her on my extension,. Stephen KingRural Road 1New Hampshire, USADear Mr. King, My friend Becky said she knew you and I entered this story contest but I didn't win anything so I thought I would send you my story. They didn't even give me any feed back. Could you please criticize it for me? By the way, I learned in my writing class that you should always edit a story before sending it out so I used my spell checker.The Love of Her LifeMary had never met anyone like John. He was the love of her life. They were so close. I was almost done with college and living at home with mom and dad which was not bad. They had a nice house and great Wi-Fi and a pool. And they stayed busy and left me alone. This is a story about the weekend that all that changed. Dad took off to go hunting with his buds out of state. Mom decided to go out with a bunch of her friends, they were going to hit the new club in town. I thought nothing about that. Mom and her friends had met at the house and were getting ready. It was like a.