It would be possible to spruce up the characters and fix the dialogue, but the plot, well, it would be hard to do much to it without a major rewrite. ...'m normally far out of town so wouldn't be able to work with you personally, but I could give you some directions to go with a rewrite, maybe some samples of how things could be changed to make it a work you'd be much more proud of. However, it would mean missing the projected publication date." I think we've pretty well missed it already,. How do you like it, said Theo, gripping Neil’s turgid cock? 14.5 inches, said Theo, that is impressive, I look forward to you fucking me with it when I’m ready. It will be my honour, said Neil who was watching as Theo’s strong hands were now gently rubbing his swollen shaft.Do you prefer it hard or soft sir, said Neil. Because if you want me hard all weekend then just ask and we can provide as much stimulants as you want for me. Up and down is good at the moment, I guess if I want more anal fun. Main to khus hogay main nay un ki ek jakay main utar di wo sharma gayi unhane panty nahin peheni thi mere lauday main 1000waat ka jatka laga man kar raha tha kay abhi gand maar doon per main khud ko kaa kiya aur apna karnay kamar per malish kartay kartay meri ungli maa gand say tuch ho rahi thi main nay dartay huay pucha sirf kamar gand par bhi to who oooiiii kay sath kahi kay pura kaam kardo main samjh gaya maa mujh say chuda kar apani piyas bujana chahti hain kiyon kay papa maa ko din main do. Your performance was absolutely amazing."You took the test we give to honors-track eighth graders. It is the samebasic test we repeat each year throughout high school. That way we canassess progress and find the girls who should be in even more acceleratedclasses. Many of the questions you answered correctly were at the levelexpected of a tenth or eleventh grade student, and a few were actuallycollege level material."Ever since I first examined your file I believed that a terrible mistakewas.