‘Oh Nick, Oh my god.’ she repeated over and over as he bathed her breast with his tongue. He gripped her nipple lightly in his teeth and she screa...ed, ‘Yes, Nicky, yes, lick them, suck them, bite them, Oh yes.’ After administering to both of her breasts, he began to move down her torso towards her now inflamed pussy. ‘Oh God, Nick, fuck me.’ she cried, ‘Please, Nick, now. I can’t stand it anymore. Please, please, fuck me.’ Her cries and her squirming on the bed were more than he could handle.. When she unearthed Michael's one secret fantasy, she had willingly gone along with it.The day after their wedding Michael had seemingly innocently remarked to his new bride that the young Chinese woman, Su Lin, working the front desk at the Jade Inn in San Martin was almost as skinny as Anne.Anne had flippantly teased him by remarking, "I'm probably stronger than her."Michael had laughed and asked her."Are you saying you think you could take her," he had teased."Sure," Anne had replied with a. But she did want him. She always did when she awoke from that dream. Rolling on to her side, she snaked her hand under the duvet and stroked her fingers across his abdomen. He didn’t stir, and even though the tone of his muscles was less taut, she could still feel their shape. Her stroke changed direction and descended down to find his cock. It was half swollen, like it always was in the morning. It felt so hot as she wrapped her fingers around the shaft and slowly pumped at it. Even in his. This is good for adding dialogue. You also edit as you read through.3) The last pass is to add still another sentence between every existing sentence. This is more of stage direction in describing what is going on around the characters as they interact.(sue) That is a very sound and interesting way of developing a story, Raven.(Raven) I urge people to try it. It works. That was written by Michael Crichton.(Elizabeth) I'm confused: I thought that authors *revise* and *editors* edit. I.