It doesn't have to be brutal and an honest opinion of a less than average story can be beneficial to the author. I've beaten up some people in my revi...ws, but generally they came right back at me asking me to look at a new story and see if I thought it was better, or asking for some more information on what I liked and disliked. Give authors some credit because sometimes it looks like the reviews avoid anything that can be construed as negative.Not true, I know! They're getting ready to mug me,. ....Now it was time.I took my bat large end forward and pressed it against her cunt with my fingers I spred her lips wide. she begged ram it in me please Daddy. and so I did all at once ten inches of four inch round bat went up my little girls cunt all at once it went into her womb the shriek she made scared me, but the look of pain and delight on her face made me know she was in heven, pain was her pleasure and I was her instument. I twisted the bat making her cum agian and started pumping it. Several hours later, she pulled into the driveway. As she got out, I could tell she was very happy, but I didn't see any bags to show she bought any books! She came in the house and said "Wow, do I have a story for you".This is how it went at the book store as it was told to me........She pulled into a parking spot and as she was getting out, she saw a couple walking towards the store in the same row she was in, they got to the back of her car as she began to step out, with the skirt I picked. ’ She uncrossed and re-crossed her beautiful long legs slowly, as if to capture Hal’s attention. ‘I’m a person who prefers quality over quantity Hal. I guess you being a columnist also fit that profile?’ The move didn’t fail. Hal swallowed and had the ridiculous feeling of being caught in a web. He cleared his throat. ‘I um noticed on your profile that it’s your birthday Friday. For some reason a bra jumped into my mind.’ Macy folded her arms high up over her chest and said coldly she believed.