"And remember I stared into your beautiful eyes and said I likedyou...more than a friend." Ryan smiled again as troy felt his body change.Groaning sof...ly troy felt his height slowly fade even as he looked to Ryanhe felt the room tower over him. His height melted away as he lost inchafter inch falling down to a mere five-four.His thin lips plumped outward softly as they felt softer, fuller, pouting.His eyes took on a femmine oval shape even as lashes sprang forth longermore fuller. his eye color. "Shh, don't be saying that when you have nothing to apologise for,"said Charlie, feeling a lump of guilt grow in his throat. "I'm the onewho should be apologising, not you, so quit stealing my lines here,Mom!" he said, feebly attempting to lighten the mood. He looked toRachel whom now stood by Mary, softly comforting her shoulder assoothing consolation."Mom, look at me," said Charlie. "I'm so, so sorry for what I put youthrough over the past few days. I'm sorry for my selfish and. She could feel the erotic pressure of his big black cock push past her already wet slick lips as he started to penetrated deep into her, he pushed very very slowly in and out getting his cock covered in her natural lube. Her warm love canal was contracting and loosening around him, he gave her time so that she had a chance to accommodate herself to his girth of his large thick long black cock as he started again pushing his thick black cock gently in,but steadily into her pink love canal, her. I wasn't happy with it. I decided to submit it to a jury of my peers, in the best forum for improvement in the alt.sex.stories community: The Fish Tank. I think that was a very good decision. No story which entered the tank failed to be improved, and following The Fish Tank, whether it was my story or another author's has helped all of my writing. These amazing people helped:Uther Pendragon, Katie McN, cmsix, John,Alexis Siefert, Desdmona, Tesseract, and DennyWhat follows is the post-immersion.