This isn’t a definitive list of everything a writer should think about, but I do flatter myself that it lays out quite a few things that it’s help...ul to bear in mind when reading over your first draft. Some of the points that are made here have their origin in the critique of a single story; others are my personal crusades. So if it feels like I’ve chosen a fairly arbitrary ***********ion of things to talk about, that’s why.The reader only has your words to guide themWhen you have a picture in. He laid back on my bed, marveling on how soft the four inches of memory foam mattress pad was. He closed his eyes and sighed.I allowed my eyes to wander down my beloved's body, drinking in every detail. His thick, dishwater blonde hair was shoulder length, slightly wavy and layered. His alabaster white skin was silky smooth, flawless, and absolutely delectable. Chiseled Grecian nose, perfectly sculpted lips, and long lashed eyes. His body was perfect; I often told him that from the back he. She said she was sorry to hear that and then joked we both must both be so horny. I said that we were, it was so difficult being young and in our sexual peak and with no one to help us. Eric followed immediately with the question, “When are women in their sexual peak?” Denise said ‘somewhere around thirty’ so I responded “Wait, aren’t you somewhere around thirty?” She blushed, looked up at us with a smile and said that she was too old for us, but “that she could teach us a thing or two.” . Joanne, at whose house they were, signaled the guest room.There was a towel already on the chair. “Joanne says I have to put it under me,” but when she worked herself off of it and he tried to pull it back, “Fuck it,” she giggled.Back in the den, his buddies gave him a thumbs-up and Katherine disappeared into a huddle of girlfriends.He’d sem Kara Lee and Nora outside the dressing room door on his way to the party, and wished they’d come along to talk about the play.The show was several days.