Please try and use proper grammar. I don't have a problem with minor typos and more obscure grammatical errors, but you should always use capital lett...rs at the beginning of a sentence, for proper nouns, and the word "I". Try not to use tense shifting, it's one of my pet peeves. Tense shifting is when you start a chapter in one tense and suddenly shift to another at a random point for no reason. As a general rule, this story is in present tense, unless you are using a flashback.Keep in mind. Bahut dard kar raha hai. Choot phar dali.” I kissed on her lips and said “Tumhari choot bahut tight thi- kunwari jo thi” After few seconds I started slow fuck of her choot, she was now feeling a little less pain and started enjoying the thrust.She inserted her tongue in my mouth saying “Aap ka lund bahut lamba aur mota hai aur meri choot kasi hui. Ab to mai hamesha isi lund say chudwaongi aur jindigi ka maja loongi” We continued kissing, hugging and talking filthy with slow movements of my lund. Then I had to admit tomy parents. My Dad said he would accept it, but that he didn't like itor want anything to do with it. He's not angry about it but he doesn'tlike it either. My mum was okay, buying me my own clothes and lettingme dress up. My sister said that she was upset about it at first, butthat like she liked idea of having a little sister. There are threerules. I'm not to tell anyone, I'm not to go out, and I can't theirclothes without asking them if I can borrow them."I sighed and. I went to the sent message folder and as I read the messages I started to feel real sick. "Can't wait to fuck U. C U 2nite." "U want my dick? U sure ur clit's big enough 4 me hun?" "Shot my load just thinking of u." I put the cell phone back in his jacket. Part of me wanted to confront him then and there but I figured he'd just deny it and say the phone wasn't his. I had to find out the truth, but couldn't think how to do it. I wondered how he was finding all these sluts. Then I suddenly had an.