This is obviously one guy’s opinion, but especially if you’re starting out, you’re 30-chapter-long story that isn’t about character developmen..., just sex, isn’t going to have to many dedicated readers sticking around for chapters ten and up. Why is this? Hell, this is the case with longform erotica that focuses on character development too. Is longform erotica a game you’re destined to lose from the start? Not quite, but it’s less bent on instant gratification. A ‘part one’ or ‘chapter one’. It ran down to my lips. That salty flavor coated my lips and seeped into my mouth. It had such a strong flavor. It was so delicious because it was his cum. My tongue swept out, gathering it up.Billy grunted with each blast, Cali fisting him as he spurted more and more. He painted our faces. He coated us in his hot spunk. I felt so dirty. So nasty to coated in his jizz. He sprayed us both as he stared down at us with such lust in his eyes.“Both just a pair of cum-sluts!” he snarled as he pointed. Look, a little girl.Don't send us away now. Please?I can see the top of its little pink head, with little wisps of hair, asit nurses on her tit. "She's beautiful," I say, sitting on the edge ofthe sofa looking down at them.She looks up at me and smiles. "Thang k'you, Gretchen," she says.Hmmm. In the time between waking and now, in the madness of giving birth,I don't remember telling anyone my name. The dispatcher only asked forthe address. And I know the girl didn't ask, not in the bedroom, not. ” she said with a smile..I was aghast at her comment.. as i tried to hide my erection in my pajamas..“Stop trying to hide it.. It’s not the first one i have seen :-P”I was blushing like a red tomatoe.. I approached her smiling to take a closer look… and gathered my courage to speak..“Show me the bite.. Take off your hands.. ”She said “as you say mr.crybaby ;-)”I almost fainted at the beauty of those heavenly breasts.. So milky white.. As if they were made off white creamy clouds.. No wonder i.