If you want to read the whole book, fine, but just tell us how that middle page came across. Word choice, construction, whatever happens on that page....We're talking about words, not story. Make sense?"It apparently does.At our next Forum (M&M's for nourishment), we give our middle-page analyses. A few girls found sentences that have oomph because the writer doesn't employ a catchall verb or generic adjective.Our first writing (not "homework") is three or four lines about waking up.Most girls. He pulled the ring back up until she was standing with her arms over her head, feet together, standing tall but with her feet flat on the ground. The men started drifting off one by one until she was alone in the Commons. John said that they dimmed the whole set then let out the dogs. I want to go back and watch that part. I guess they were pretending it was night time and everyone was home asleep. And what happens at night? Just like at home, the critters come out. Right away, a little pack. I sit in my car in awe as I witness you please yourself, wishing it was me doing it to you. Once you are done, you set your toy aside and casually clean up. I feel as if I am drunk and can't even see straight from the forceful orgasm I experienced. I take a swig from a half empty bottle of water and start my car to go for a quick drive, to enjoy what's left of the beautiful autumn night. When I return I see you sitting outside on your porch with a cigarette in one hand and a beer in the other.. We just reacted. Right, Arlene?”“Well said,” Arlene agreed as she reached in front of her husband to grasp her sister-wife’s hand temporarily. “Oh, I suspect that we’ll relive those few seconds over and over and ‘what if’ them to death, but we know we did the only thing we could do under the circumstances. We just both thank God that you and Mom insisted that we practice.”“Don’t forget Sergeant Higgins,” Ann offered. “We had to do whatever he was training us to do perfectly before he would let.