.an' I love being fucked up the arse too..." she looked at me and smiled guiltily, "...you are gonna poke me arse, ain't ya, Daddy"? I nodded feverish...y, "Oh yes, little bitch...rest assured..." Gemma beamed and then remembered something else, "Some days, I can hardly sit down...me arse and cunt are really sore, an' me jaw aches too..." the older woman at my side slowly shook her head and said softly, "My, my, Gemma! You really are a little whore, aren't you"? Gemma smiled and nodded rapidly. Let’s talk about the sex itself for a bit. In a longform story, the sex itself will most likely not be the entirety of the story. Unless you plan to make a 16-chapter story about one egregiously long boning session, there will be stuff other than sex in your story. How does it all balance out? Enter rule two of writing longform erotica: decide a balance. In my stories, I write primarily to showcase non-sexual events and the sexual events that take place are not ‘in the spotlight,’ so to speak,. They stood straight out from her body for what seemed like a foot and their ends were capped with big puffy pink nippples. She was squeezing and pinching them as Tiffany ate her pussy; she tried to speak again and failed. 'Tiff..Ohhhhh, ohhhhh, Tiffy!!...' I was wishing I could see some of the detail work that was going on over in my chair, but counted myself lucky and reminded myself that the view from over here was just fine. Tiffany and her perfect ass with her short-short pajama bottoms. As I progressed, she placed a hand on my shoulder for support and started to rub her clit for me. It didn’t take long before I could feel my balls begin to roll and the familiar feeling of orgasm begin to take over. Jane could tell and as she moved close and pushed her vagina out towards my penis she whispered “Shoot all over my vagima hair.” That did it. I groaned and aimed my penis directly at her patch and blasted my first shot. A powerful stream drilled her pubic region and with the.