O I haven't completed this short story I started a week or two ago, but I would like some opinions none the less :) Merci So, I doubted very much that...anything this customer said would change my life at all, let alone forever.I poured him a cup of coffee and smiled, “What can I get for you, sweetie?” I learned early on that using terms like sweetie and honey made a traveling man feel good and, hence, tip better.“Well, I’d love a piece of that pecan pie I saw twirling around in the dessert case,” he answered. “But what I’d really like is to have an hour to pitch my idea to you. What time are you done working?”This. “Mom, you shouldn’t have come down. You spoiled my initiation. Ms. Connor isn’t going to be happy with me.”“Don’t worry, Anna. You’ll be fine.” Debbie said, then shouted, “Grab her!”I got up, trying to pull Anna up with me. I had to get us out of there. I had to get upstairs and call the cheerleaders’ moms and let them know that the party was over and to come collect their girls.I wasn’t quite quick enough. Tonya was closest and grabbed my ankle. I tried crawling away but couldn’t shake her. But Juan put on a hell of an act if he was faking.I had a second chance to test the theory tonight.I had to admit, I was looking forward to taking Ivan out. He didn't dress up often, but the time I'd seen him dressed to impress, he looked like Russian prince. I liked that idea since I was hoping to royally fuck him at some point.I took a few minutes to look at my investments again. I moved a few funds to more aggressive positions. That may sweeten the pot, but it wouldn't solve my income.
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