Tydman. Blair again glanced through the file and continued on, "I also see that you and your husband have your home mortgage with us, as of this momen... you are technically not late with your next payment, but you are about to go past the ten day grace period which means that you will be in arrears on both loans, you owe us a great deal of money, and from the looks of things you aren't going to be able to repay it!!!" Nancy again felt the tears welling up in her eyes, and seconds later she was. The SRU story didn't start out that way and when I fumbled for something magical to cause the transformation, I picked SRU, wrong choice, I should have done a better tie-in!(*Anne-Mal) So what exactly do you consider constrictive criticism?(elrodw) Anything that doesn't start with "you stupid misbegotten oaf masquerading as a hack writer..." Really, anything that I can think about and use to improve a story as long as it doesn't get personal, I can usually avoid reacting as if it were. If. Watching her this way was even better than seeing her in the mirror. Her eyes glazed and her head slumped and she was loving and hating what she was feeling.After a bit more of that I told John, “I’ve hurt her pussy, go kiss it and make it better.”He eagerly crawled over to her and pushed his face between her legs. She gasped and moaned in pleasure, then I started focusing the single tail on her nipples, and she moaned some more. I can only imagine how her head was processing the combination of. She is almost limp in my grasp but I held her upright as I thrust up into her. She feels my pubic hair rubbing against her sore clit. I had eaten her raw and the sensation of my hair on her clit is almost too much to bear but I continue thrusting into her, hips pounding as I plunged her onto my cock, ramming deep inside. My thrusts are rhythmic and she feels her clit swelling again, despite its earlier abuse and as I continue to ram into her, she came again, moaning and whimpering as she no.