If you write in the first person you cannot possibly know what Clarissa is thinking. You should read other more accomplished...I deleted it. It didn't...bother me to hear that old argument. I knew how to write, maybe better than he did. Some people were hard-wired to dislike creativity or non-conformity, and felt it was their solemn duty to point out my errors. My harshest critics were other writers of erotica, something I didn't understand. They, of all people, should be more forgiving. Perhaps. Lucille is a formidable woman. She stands almost six feet tall and has flaming red hair. Her daddy, Big Paul, had made a lot of money in cattle and oil and Lucille was his only heir. JP on the other hand was a quiet sort of fellow... until you got him mad. JP was short, about 5' 6" and kind of mousey looking like I say until you got him mad. It sure seemed like he was mad today.They plunked down in the two chairs across from my desk and Lucille began, "Damn it Bubba, you got to help us. You are. I felt my heartbeat increase and my breathing become heavier as i watched him open my friend requests and add a mystery profile with a riding crop as a profile picture.Lolly : ok ive added you. CUNTHUNTER : lolly are you ok? I shook my head to snap myself out of the dazed trance id slipped into and softly replied "what are you doing?" CUNTHUNTER : lolly i want you to take a deep breath and stay calm for me ok ? my breath trembled as i obeyed him before swallowing hard and nodding.CUNTHUNTER :. Le spiagge in quel periodo erano già deserte ed il mio amico, Giorgio, mi chiese impavidamente di togliermi il reggiseno.«Dai... toglitelo, in questo angolo sperduto di mondo chi vuoi che ti veda?» mi disse.Io un pò esibizionista, un pò cosciente della reazione che le mie enormi tette avrebbero dato a luogo o forse semplicemente mi piaceva mostrarmi nuda con le mie forme generose, feci la parte di quella che se la tira.«Giorgio, non mi sembra il caso... e se passa qualcuno?» risposi con finto.