In short it was very good, very well written as well as being erotic (though he would have used a more basic word). Then the chapter started to change... it got violent; he was taken by surprise, what was going one, why was she... ? The story grew darker. By the end of the chapter he was horrified, dreading what the next sentence would bring, unable to stop himself because of a desperate need to discover what would happen.“Why did you make me read this?” he demanded“What did you make of it?”“It. Which I didn’t really. The reality of it was that my cock had been hard for so long with thoughts, and now those thoughts were becoming real and my underwear suffered for it becoming soaked in spots with pre cum seepage. Kris continued to caress my cock but she slowly started squeezing it and rubbing t with more force, ten minutes and halfway through the blunt later I spied from the corner of my eye that Keon had his left hand between my wife's thighs cupping and massaging Kriss’ pussy through. ‘I love winning.’ ‘Men!’ I said derisively. ‘Hold onto those thoughts for a while, Slick.’ At the Wal-Mart he picked up some food stuff while I found a selection of rugged clothes and underwear. I picked up enough to last a week or so. I dithered over getting some sexy night clothes and finally gave in and added them to the cart. If I was going to give myself to him, I wanted to wrap the present really well. I could get them bought and sacked before he saw them. When I got to the check-out I. The words gushed out of her in a half second.I pulled the shorts down and kicked them off my feet, giving her the full view.“Oh God,” she said once again.I laughed out loud. “Anyone would think you had never seen one before Maryam.”“I haven’t,” she said. “Well, only on the Internet.”“What, I thought you and Mo had made out?”“We did Shailu, but I didn’t see his… ummm… dick. It was dark when we… done it… it was in the back seat of his car in a country-park at night. I didn’t see anything really;.