"The only real comment I have is you put the most important part of the story at the end. You were building up to it, I understand, but this isn't a n...vel, and the reader needs to be told what the most important part is up front, since he may not stick it out till the final point." She could see what he was talking about as soon as he pointed it out, and could see he was right. He made the changes, and yes, it really was better.Over the course of a couple years it had become routine. Only. . I mean, that’s what the check is for ... and if it bounces, I’m afraid that...”“Well Miss Bramble ... that’s unfortunate, but if the check comes in I’m afraid we’ll have to return it. We’ve already paid on two other checks of yours, and the bank can’t continue...”“Mr. Larrell,” Nita said smiling up at him as she rose and moved closer to his desk.Jake made an imperceptible move backward in his rolling chair. Christ, what was she going to do! He looked frantically toward the door of his office. ”From the sound of his voice I knew I’d do well to obey him so reluctantly I licked his asshole and got a funny taste in my mouth.“Lick it more, harder, put your tongue in me, now an’ don’t stop till I tell ya’”I had now gotten over the shock and humiliation of licking this man’s asshole as he laid back with his legs spread open and me kneeling on the floor between his hairy legs and I did as I was told, I probed his hairy asshole with my tongue and he groaned with pure pleasure. While I was. ” she intoned The first landed as if in answer to her request, it left a red line of pain across the presented backside, she cried out, he made her wait, then a second landed, by the fifth, she was continuously wailing, each stroke he savoured, making her wait, sometimes 5 seconds, others 20 or more, Her seat now bloody and a pattern of welts, The Master`s wife calling the strokes, “18,” her cry one of torment, a pause “19,” again the pitiful wailing, “20” her body jerking as each blow added.