I get the words ‘Djinn’ and ‘Iblis’ and ‘Shaitan’, which reference genies and demons and the Islamic version of Satan. I get similar words...in the Hebrew and Greek parts, as if I’m reading the Old and New Testaments or something. But without translating all of it, I don’t really get the context, don’t understand what it’s really saying about them. The number 9 comes up a lot for some reason. ‘9 after the beginning’? Or is it saying ‘it ends after 9’? 9 what? Is it a duration? 9 days? Weeks? I. She stopped sucking to stroke it a couple of times, licked the head, and next crept up on Blanes body licking his chest as she went. Ready, Blane? Oh yeah! he said happily, the world beginning to twirl and blur. the girl laughed at Blanes response. She reached again for the bedside table to grab a condom sitting on it. She carefully pulled the plastic over Blanes throbbing dic. as she next inserted his covered cock into her twat, she moaned with pleasure as it slipped in to her warm and wet. The fight leading up to Walter's switchto Valerie and his genderbending. I purposely tried to keep the firstpart peaceful so the reader would be equally surprised by the suddenescalation as Walter and his family are.A little fun fact is that I gave the story up to this point to a fewfriends. One of them didn't get the detail that it was a work inprogress. She flat out told me it was very mean to end the story onsuch a cliffhanger.Chapter 4,was hard to write. First I tried the "OMG I AM A GIRL. "Thank you," I said, and then stood up. I went and fetched him a damp wash cloth. He took it; wiped himself; and handed it back to me without a word. His concern for being viewed as a 'man', and not a 'fag', was all important to his sense of self, and I understood that. To have thanked me, in his way of viewing things, would have placed him inside the 'faggot' category, and that was something he would never accept. So I thanked HIM, instead; even though he didn't acknowledge the reason for.