On my own I would think about having the real thing inside me, even at school it would wash over me like a daydream then I would suddenly snap out of ...t! I thought the only way would be if they used condoms so on my lunch break I had a word with them (we went to the same school) where we would usually go and eat in the park, I said if they agreed to use a condom I would let them go inside me, I’ve never seen smiles like it! They both said they would as they did not want to get me pregnant but. A few people have, rightfully so, called out the story as being a regular young adult story with sex scenes thrown into it. While there are other schools of thought, this is a very valid criticism. So how should the very best erotic stories go about balancing their sexual content with their ability to be a story? On a scale of 0 to 100 in writing talent, it takes about a 2 to just write sex. All you need to know about how to write sex is to know the action, then swap synonyms (so like instead. There were some gay guys back in there having some fun butt fucking and reaching around to stoke dick at the same time. I peeked at them through the bushes for a while. Then I felt a guy walk up behind me, and he put his hand up my skirt. I wasn't wearing panties. His hand found my pussy, and he fingered my clit, which really got my attention. I turned my head and asked him if liked to talk dirty. He laughed and said he would show me a thing or two. He called me a slut whore and forced me down. "She's made it very clear." Just step away, okay meathead?" Mark said with a sneer. "I just need tosay one thing." So say it," I said. Janelle backed up to just behind me.Mark's mouth twisted as he agonized over something to say, but I guessthe words failed him. I failed to notice his fist clenching at his side.Quickly, he threw a punch and caught me on the cheek that knocked me tothe floor. I heard Janelle cry out.I had never been hit before, not in the face. It stung, and disorientedme, but.