I am ordering pizza if your finished come down and get some. With that said I turned and went down stairs.After a few minutes they all appeared in the...lounge not saying a word I just smiled Lilly had jumped up and was sitting on my lap and snuggled down to watch the end of her film. After about 30 minutes the door bell rang I asked Kelly to get tom and his mate which she didI went to answer the door as I had presumed it was the pizza I went through to the kitchen telling them to come and get. Jim was shocked moot by the presence ofreal magic before him, and found he could scarcely distinctreality from hallucination as he rubbed his weary-eyedhead."Greetings and Salutations!" boomed the Genie in hissonorously stentorian voice. "I have arrived aftersojourning for much perilous distance in order to grantyour wishes and use my glorious powers to change you intobeing female!!!"Jim couldn't believe his ears, for this was NOT what he hadsaid out loud that he was wishing for! But, you see,. I asked if she was ok and, she just said i'm fine. She looked up and our eyes met, and she quickly looked back downward, as she was embarrased of what I had witnessed. She told me took the blazer to the back and brought it out a few minutes later looking clean and presentable. She had used a spot remover and it worked. I asked how much and, she just kept looking down in shame and said don't worry about it. I thanked her and left not knowing that I would run into her later that day. After. That’s my style, I’m hyper-critical with everyone, even myself. I rarely like what I write, and I rarely go back to the same story again after I’ve reviewed it. At the same time, I try to practice making my tone more objective than ‘mean.’ There are still ways I can improve on this, and I’m always learning.Even if your style is blunt, working on minimizing the meanness will earn you some allies on this site, and considering the site runs on community, that is incredibly valuable. Even in your.