We finished breakfast I took my plate to the sink; Patty brought hersand kissed my cheek."Not too bad, I'm sure you'll get better at it," she patted m... ass andwandered off out of the kitchen.I knew she wasn't being mean, just honest. We would be having a lot ofhonest moments, of that I was certain. I cleaned up the kitchen and mademy way to the bathroom.I showered and shaved my entire body. There wasn't much from havingshaved the previous week for the party but it still took time. I did alight. She is already wet there with her juices, I smelled at her it was good odor to me. And I kissed her pussy above the panty. She felt nervousness as I did.She hugged me tightly and lip locked mine. She held me with my hair and started to kiss vigorously. I removed my t-shirt, she started to open my jeans and I helped her. Now I am in my under ware and she is in her pink color matching BRA and PANTY. She is looking like a sex goddess and a ripe fruit to eat it.I removed her bra and released her. Some people were hard-wired to dislike creativity or non-conformity, and felt it was their solemn duty to point out my errors. My harshest critics were other writers of erotica, something I didn't understand. They, of all people, should be more forgiving. Perhaps by denigrating my work it elevated theirs. That was fine. Their comments were given as much deliberation as my filing system for their emails - hitting the trash button.storyname= Serendipitycomments= your the best riter on this site.. “Ooooo, that feels so good, don’t stop.”My body still shaking his arms wrapped around my legs his mouth suctioned to my opening lapping up every drop of the nectar he’s so skillfully withdrawn from deep within my pussy. Continuing to lick and suck my clit his hand slides up my stomach taking my hard nipple into his hand and rolling between his thumb and forefinger. Feeling him kissing his way up my stomach taking time to suck and bite each nipple his hard cock pressing into my flesh like a hot.