He was going to let me use the umbrella as he soaked himself whileshowing me my new Prius.* * *I just about jumped out of my skull. I couldn't beli...ve what an idiot Iwas. Just as we pulled out of the parking lot, I saw her pulling in.She was driving a different car than she had when she was a guy, but I'drecognize that face anywhere. Just seeing it reminded me of the imagesI'd created with the umbrella.But I couldn't freak out in front of the guys. I'd just wait until weparked, and then. ***I knocked on Candi's door at eight-thirty, her goodbye present in my pocket. I didn't want to hurt her, and I thought that fifty thousand dollars would ease the pain.I was surprised when Candi answered the door. She was wearing an incredibly sexy, incredibly trashy green dress; something that an unsophisticated person like Candi would wear. "Come in, Darling." Candi said in an almost laughable voice, trying to sound seductive, almost, but not quite, succeeding. "I've been waiting for. Sal didn't mind, replied "it's okay, Jay's busy, Maisy" then Mai just grabbed a glass of orange and left. When I had got Sally to grind, buck and have a shuddering orgasm, we retreated back to Sal's room.Soon as we walked in, we had a shock of our own in return.....Maisy was lying under the bedclothes, presumably had a hand up her skirt, playing with herself."Oh god, sorry Maisy, we didn't mean to walk in!" I said, meant genuinely. Her reply was "Well, I thought you two would be busy & you had. Probably that non-writing job of yours."It hurt to hear my work called rubbish, but I wasn't there to be told pleasant lies. On the other hand, it was comforting to know she thought we could do something about it, and I was pleased she had noticed and appreciated my hard work. Things could have been much worse."Now, the main character in your story is called Adam. From this fact alone I deduce he is a boy like you, is that right?" Yes, a man." Well, why do you speak of 'her' clothes then? Don't.