And it looked like he was displaying himself to me on purpose. He actually adjusted his crotch several times and each time it looked like he was getti...g his cock into a position (under his loose shorts) so that I could see his cock. I actually started to get a hardon over this and I adjusted myself several times as well. Mr S noticed this and gave me glances of assurances and would wink at me during moments when he was making some gesture with regards to keeping my goals and ambitions in line. (ellie) I think that people need to be reminded that good criticism helps us to be better writers and to give them better stories. I know I am when I write poetry, everyone I show them to love them, but I'm not so easily satisfied (Chilli) But some authors can't seem to see their own problems. What's worse -- they refuse to admit they HAVE any problems. (Anne-Mal) So you would say that criticism has helped you? (Chilli) A thousand-fold. (Anne-Mal) How about just a simple "Thank You"? (Chilli). Mmm, I love seeing a woman's cum on my cock like that.Suzette told me to fuck her harder, she wanted more, telling me to fucking give her all of it as I picked up my pace, longer, deeper strokes in and out of her. I reached down at one point, spread her ass cheeks and rubbed her asshole with my thumb, driving her nuts. As I packed my cock, balls deep into her, I slipped the tip of my thumb in her ass, using her creamy pussy juice for lube, I could feel her pushing back, then as I worked my cock. ’ She asked. ‘No I think we will pass on that.’ I said. She walked away and I looked at Amy and knew that my little slut had a mouthful of cum. Her eyes were sparkling. ‘Here is the check.’ Deedra said as she returned. I pulled a wade of bills from my pocket and paid the tab and then gave her a large tip. She smiled at me and then handed me a card. ‘I know you do not want desert right now but I would love to make a cream pie with you and let your sweet daughter eat it some time. This is my.