The moans became louder as I pulled him greedily into my mouth. My fingers stroked and squeezed his balls as my tongue danced around his fat cock and ...y lips caressed him from base to tip. “Oh, Mum…don’t stop!” I had no intention of stopping. I wanted to feel his hot salty sperm shooting into my mouth. Jake’s hands stroked my soft hair lovingly as I lustfully rubbed and sucked his hard cock. I felt his hands pushing me away. “Stop”. He said.“It’s ok, you can cum in my mouth, I want you to”. I. With my story Ifelt it was more natural for me to refer to them in their new sex. Forexample instead of saying "Craig looked down at himself," I said "Craiglooked down at herself," Craig is after all female now. I can see whythis would of caused some confusion and made the characters harder tofollow. In the dialog I tried to offset this by putting in the name ofthe character talking or thinking as much as possible, but still I cansee how this can be confusing, sorry.On last note I debated for. She whimpered, squirming slightly and wishing he would just get on with it and be done."Shh, I said I wasn't goint to hurt you, and I'm not. Trust me, this will help."She stilled. He rubbed a bit more before inserting a finger. She gasped and squirmed again. He hushed her, assuring her that it was ok. He slowly moved his finger inside her, a bit deeper before pulling it out and inserting two. She whined, her body still tense, but she didn't move or fight.He continued to gently push his fingers. “Alright well, just, hide valuables, be ready to change the lock on your apartment if need be, and consider locking your bedroom at night.”“Heh, right. Gotcha, I’ll do that,” Ulysses said, putting his car in park in a driveway. “Alright well I’m going to go shower and I’ll talk to you later.”********************“Ahh! Yes! Yes!” Jennifer cried out. The single, red headed, mom was climaxing again in the shower with Ulysses. She was straddling him, while he stood, pumping his hips upward, pinning.