You make a lot of bad decisions when you are young, dumb, and full of cum.I hitched a ride on one of our roving patrol vehicles, spotted the house, go... out a block down, reconnoitered the area, and circled around to the back door. She answered the door while speaking on the wall phone and waved me to a couch. She was speaking Tagalog, was about 5’6”, trim, shoulder length black hair, probably a ‘B’ cup size, and wearing a red knit shirt and short denim skirt. All in all, she was a very. . Angry? No! A rush came over me, as I heard my mom’s wet pussy getting rammed through...“Michael! Ah fuck!”As I listened my hand was shaking... What do I do?“I’m your slut! yesss!”I heard a man's voice “your soo wet!”“I’m your slut! I want you to cum on my face!”I heard them switch positions... “ohh yesss you want this?”“Mmhmm..” “Give it to me!”*A wet slapping sound“Ahhhh fuckk!”Silence…And then!“That’s soo much cum! Let me take a picture”*Laughter, as the sink began to run...I quickly. .Or fir mere lad ko pakad ke bhabhi ne apane cht k kane pe set kiya or khud aage aane ki kosus kar rahi thi.. .Or fir mene bhi bade aaram se bhabhi ki chut me land gusaya. .Or bhabhi ke upar chipak gaya or kiss kar ne laga. Land sidha bhabhi ki chut me gus gaya ..Or me bhabhi kiss kar ne laga thoada tihght ja raha tha or bhabhi ko dard ho raha tha.. Bhabhi k nakhun muche or ukasa rahe thae….Fir mene dhire dire land ko bahar nikalata. Or ek jatake me anadar karta..Or vo jor se uchaal thi..Bahot. Their suggestions help me improve the story. (Even if I don't follow their advice.) I don't have any at the moment, but I might hunt around for a few in the future.(Mindy) What advice would you give to a beginning writer?(Stephanie) Give up! (I don't want the competition) :)(*Wendy-J) Too glib dear!(Stephanie) Seriously. The only way to learn is to write and listen to the constructive criticism of others. It can hurt (I know!), but practice, practice, practice!(Anne-Mal) When you write a story,.