And George has pointed out enough of them that I thought others might learn from ... um ... well let's just call them my mistakes.That way I won't get...hate mail from a couple hundred other authors.BobWe start with a definition.Squick: A term of the vernacular that is the opposite of "kink" when applied to reading erotica. A reader chooses the story based on his or her kink(s). The reader usually dumps the story based on a squick.The word is commonly believed to have derived from the sound made. “Well we shall see if they are in the parking lot gossiping or if they have already left.”“I am not sure which would be a worse sign.”“So, 24 huh?”“Did Stan tell you the whole story?”“He said that she was a young professional that you have known for a while.”“Oh boy.”“What?’“I first met her when she was 8 years old.”“Oh boy. That will lead to some raised eyebrows.”“Did he tell you about the incidents with the police?”“Police?”“I’ll take that as a no!” I smiled at her concerned look.“This is. A song by U2.I hate U2, she thought... funny that their song would come to mind now... ok, ladies and gentlemen, the moment of truth is here. So far I'm wearing almost as much as I normally do at the pool... bra and panties, but that is about to change... drastically.She faced the bed and Jerome, reached behind her back, and unhooked her bra. In one swift motion it was gone. It too landed on the bed. She paused and took a deep breath. Her breasts suddenly felt cold and her nipples instantly. When it was over Leo slapped his men on the back and walked out of the office.Linda had just returned to the house after another circle around the clearing. She was even thinking about calling the lawyer to find out if they had hired people that liked to trap as there were so many snares around.That was when she saw Trap's ears twitch then she heard the calls of other wolves. The first was far off put then another howl was closer."Damn, who ever they are, they're coming fast. Trap stay in the.