Zax and his Master left the blue tower and headed to Laivien's valley."However, your actions are still in need of reprimanding". Kartius's tone change... to severe and his expression grew solemn. "You can ask Martial niece Zetsa to pass on a message for you, until you will comprehend the third bottleneck you are not permitted to leave little sister's valley".Glancing over his shoulder and seeing Zax's dejected face, Kartius snorted and asked. "Am I clear?" Yes, Master". Zax felt awful. He sensed. She was already turned on, and closing her eyes, she allowed the fantasy to wash over her just as the water was.She imagined Jamie in the shower with her, kissing her all over her body as he explored the soft curves she offered for his pleasure. Her hands stood in for his as she imagined them sliding down over the soft flare of her hips, then around to caress her soft buns as their lips met in a long passionate kiss.As the kiss with her imaginary lover ended, her hands went to her soft breasts. Atthe end of February I added an analysis of Brinn's developingpsychological state, and sketches of an possible follow up storydepending on his decision. Revising plot and add ons continued untilearly in April, with small textual touches since.I originally intended posting this as review/comment, first to the lastchapter, then to the Appendixes. To reduce space it is not written outfully, somewhat sketchy, mainly important dialogue. But it developedover time, and has now grown to 11 pages here,. I found myself taking one sly look at their chests or between their legs and then I moved on to talk to them as people. After two hours I was a comfortable as I had ever been. One thing about being nude, is that you can’t tell if someone is filthy rich or depressingly poor.“Time for some music!” Mary called out. It was strange that the folks who stood out were the guys in the band. They were clothed! It was strange that mary would say the music would start now, since the band had been playing.